You Pulled Me

I feel so guilty.
I swear I didn't push you!
You're begining to fall for me.
And you're still with her.
I'm trying to catch you,
without falling myself.
It's not working.
You're falling even harder,
and now the ground is shaking beneath my feet.
I feel do guilty.
I swear I didn't push you!
You've left her for me now.
I'm trying to find another him,
to keep my balance.
Im in denial that im falling.
Now I've hit the pavement.
I feel so guilty.
I swear I didn't push you!
You pulled me!~





Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2006-10-31 at 21:39

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
Val my sweet darling granddaughter, you are a genius. These are poems from a very gifted writer. I am your biggest fan! This poem is powerful. It pulls the reading in makes the reader part of the story.
2006-11-26


Jessica Rexroat
there will be many many more that fall for you in the years to come. don't feel guilty you can not control their feelings, you can't help it if you are marvelous. Val, the maturity in your poems is striking. Keep honing your skills
2006-11-01


maxmedo
Val, it's not ur fault at all
You didnt let go
When he was going to fall
He left and now should you
Find another dreams
A good one
I know they are rare and few

Your comments the day before
Has brought my ships to shore
Made me smile with glee
For that i must respect and bow for thee...



~max~
2006-11-01


gills
:) very well worded! Loved it truly
2006-11-01


Kathy Lockhart
How do you know this stuff. Your mind is way beyond your years. Like the bird asks in the P.D. Eastman book, "Are you my mother?"
2006-10-31