It is a conversation in mind one is called max and the other is medo...one is fed from life and the other still have hope....


The Loner....(II).....Based on a true story


I was abandonned
When i needed people the most
I thought living was for free
But know i now the cost

My heart lives in pain
My souls drinks anguish
My mind is totally lost

Do you need someone?
Is there anything missing in your life?

I always complain
About the unfair life
About tears and pain
Im fed up
Im totally fed up
I wish i can write happiness
Instead of gloom
I wish my flower of love
Can ever bloom

No one understands
I always picture myself as a victim

WHY???

Do i need therapy?
A doctor maybe
To know what's wrong with me
Fix me

Pitiful i have become
I know and more of it
Is just dumb
I lost feelings
Became so numb

Come on see the light
Seize it in the darkness of the night
Shine hope through your face
May god ever bless you and embrace

You are just a dreamer
Dreaming a pink dream
Truth you speak as it seem
But it doesn't work for me....

Save me from you
Save yourself from yourself

"Max?"

Max?

Max....



Poetry by maxmedo
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Written on 2006-11-02 at 21:09

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Bella_Laluna
when life seems like there is no more
tomorrow or when pain drowns you
in oceans of loneliness and tears
the onely one who can give you strenght
is yourself... i so know this feeling
i live with it every day
its like you read me
Bella
2006-11-03


Zainab
Very well written
It's sounds very sad
Keep it up
^^
Rate:5
2006-11-03


BlueyedSoul
the heart does duel with doubt and hope at times max...choose hope...resist doubt...be a survivor not a victum.
~Blue
2006-11-02