Daybreaker
This is definitely one of your greatest poems! The rythm is perfect, to end every stanza with chasing love, is brilliant!

I think I love you!

:)
2006-11-06

Phyllis J. Rhodes
Besides being a great poem in word and rhythm, it is intelligent. It shows great wisdom. And it shows that it has come at a cost. It's just great all around. One of your best.
2006-11-05

Beautiful in rhythm, true in content, and please, somebody just has to make a song out of this great text!
2006-11-05

Saga
Now that's a testimonial telling the truth, don't chase it, let it come to you!!!
2006-11-05

Arti
FOr a change, Kathy, let love chase ya! I'll warrant its gonna be fun!
2006-11-05

Malin Johansson
This one is great !!! Chasing love is a horrble thing to do when everything isnt going the way you want it to go, even when you have the love sometimes...
Thanks for this lovely and strong and a bit angry poem!!!
2006-11-04

keith nunes
wonderfully rich tapestry kathy. you're a determined seeker who will get what she desires!
2006-11-04

BlueyedSoul
great writing Kath....i love the strength of the last lines
~blue
2006-11-04

lastromantichero
wow Katherine this is so to the point you wont have to chase for long babe
well done rgds mike
2006-11-04

Rob Graber
Vigorous write, effective structure, good job!
2006-11-04

Zachary P. B.
wow, kathy, this is so real, so true. no censorship here - just life. and yours especially, mine as well, all of us... we all are bound by this love i guess.

thanks for sharing,
z
2006-11-04