The Day I Fled...

Sun dissolve in the cloud of dust.
Darkness swallowed the living earth.
Trees bow down their heads with fear.
Birds hesitate to revisit their nests.
Calmly flowing, silvered stream
happen to be colourful
and flowed with rage.
Graveyard trembled to know,
death dangling in front.
Life missed the mark.
Accepting the unaccepted
down the narrow track,
I escaped!
So was the day I fled!

Poetry by Bhakta Raj Giri
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Written on 2006-11-09 at 05:24

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Beautifully written, and very touching. Thank you for sharing, Charlie

painful it is yet beautiful.
best regards

Phyllis J. Rhodes
I love the way you wrote this. It built suspense, it kept the reader intensely interested. It made the reader care very much and cheer at the end! You escaped! Thank God!