long way love

i here
and you
there
i feel
longing
long
long
long
longing
i feel
here
and
you
there



Poetry by la tristesse
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Written on 2006-11-11 at 01:25

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Rob Graber
Clever! Reminds me of some famous Whitman lines: "Almost I could turn and live with the animals / I look at them long and long" (if memory serves)
2006-11-11


Bhakta Raj Giri
Very well expressed a deep sense of lonliness that touches every heart.
2006-11-11