A Haiku for winter's first act


Winter Takes A Bow

The wind blows colder
The afternoon sky is raw
Winter takes a bow



Poetry by Phyllis J. Rhodes
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Written on 2006-11-15 at 00:18

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Jessica Rexroat
you take a bow mom, for your talent
2006-11-22


Emelén The PoetBay support member heart!
a beautiful and high skilled haiku .
Proud niece sends you love for winter .
2006-11-15


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a beautiful Haiku and you skill in writing these forms that look easy is awesome
they are certainly not easy to engender the atmosphere well done rgds mike
2006-11-15


BlueyedSoul
i wish i could write haiku just like this;
shivering with delight at this one!
~blue
2006-11-15


Saga
A true introduction to something that always desire a snuggle or two!!!
2006-11-15


wee2souls
cool!!! feel the chill in the air,as my teeth!!!
chatter:))))
Brrrrrrrrr cold crisp air!!!! love it!!
great oh!!Haikuuuuu!! getting a cold now:)))
lol:)
love ya
Aunt Purrrrfect Phyillie:)))
cindymac
2006-11-15


Kathy Lockhart
this is a chilling haiku. I shuttered! That's exactly what haikus should do... evoke emotion and effect the reader.
2006-11-15