moon smile
Your words carry with its passion this kind of true love emotions in a heart of a delicate romantic person,i loved it sooooooo much, well done:):)
2007-12-01

chester.p
thankyou that was incredible
2007-02-25

Mark Rogers
I truely enjoyed this poem. It touches me deeply. Thank you.
2007-02-24

Zoya Zaidi
How did I miss this Gem?

'Will I find a river of two bloods
Flowing together in harmony?'

This is my favourite couplet!

Isn't this what we want in true love:
Two hearts beating in unison;
Intermingling of hot blood,
flowing together as one.
Coming of souls together as such
to become one fragrance untouched...

(((Hugs my talented one!)))
Love, Zoya
2007-02-22

Kathy Lockhart
Arti, this is precious. It is a wonderful poetic composition.
2007-02-21

Aashish Thakur
its good oen Arti, i like the last Stanza very much....
2007-02-20

isabel
a very very great job......
keep up the good work... take care.. isabel.
2007-02-19

Amanda K
Arti,
Such a delightful piece. when we love some1 seriously that love provokes many questions that we wish the other person would answer . you put these questions and enquiries with such talent in a way that ones feels like reading more and more even if those questions won't be answered.

all the best,
2006-11-28

binesh
This is so beautiful , Arti
Just lovely
2006-11-23

Malin Johansson
Wow... Can I just say Wow... this poem is so amazingly beautiful Arti!!!
the last stanza nailed it... it brings us to the headline:)
Nice!!!
2006-11-20

Thomas Selnes
Such a cute and fragile query. Loved the second and last stanzas :)
2006-11-20

PrincessPebbles
Beautiful in every way!
2006-11-19

Kathy Lockhart
sweet romantic poetic Arti, this is beautiful. You life is overflowing with your talent. Your name is perfect for you Art (i) + st = You. You are artistic. You are art!
2006-11-19

Zainab
I really like this work of yours
It's book mark in my fav ofcoz ^^
2006-11-19

wee2souls
This write how beautiful in everyway.. a very touching write
as it touched my heart ..
lovely words :)
hugs to you my friend
cindy
2006-11-19

David Hazell
Really enjoyable clever rhymeing.
2006-11-18

Zachary P. B.
what an excellent question to ask arti... and all i've got to say is - you'll find "z" in me... all of it, the sad, the poetic, the artistic, the traveler, thinker, boy that i am... and i want to express it to the world, why hide behind walls?

thanks, bookmarked.
z
2006-11-18

night soul woman
What an amazing poem!Brilliant!Just brilliant!*Bookmarked* of course!But are your questions rhetorical? Is this what we all do? Believe in a dream that might come true so we can make it happen? Is our twin flame just a dreamy illusion? Do we all look for that knight in shining armour? Oh so many questions and even more but I better stop now :) Well written Arti!
2006-11-18

lastromantichero
hi there Arti this is a beautiful poem and one i book mark


'In my heart thou shalt will find
The love of broken dreams
The hopes of impossible schemes
yet love everlasting'


coming overe all poetic but it is a beautiful poem and you inspered me lololol well done
2006-11-18