This is not about me, just someone I used to know!


Changes

The time for me to sit around and discuss my
problems with Him is getting shorter,
I don't feel like living anymore.
My life isn't what it used to be
it changed in an instant
and I don't know what's going to happen next...

My days were the same, predictable
Now I'm being surprised around each corner, that's unpredictable.
You've come into my life,
You've changed me,
turned me inside out!

I've never cared what I did,
but now I care too much.
My friends are getting annoyed,
saying I'm not who I used to be...

Before You, I went around hurting people everywhere...

Now I've changed,
almost an angel
not yet an angel...

I still have some time,
so I'll use my last breath to praise His name!



Poetry by Surei
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Written on 2005-10-11 at 14:20

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Sofiul Azam
Yes, it's really a very good poem telling us of the change the persona has adopted into her/ (his?) life for whatever she/ (he?) thinks of as good for the people she/(he?) is often surrounded by.

Thanks for the turn of the key to the door of positive values, but this poem could be garnished with art-spice as every good cook hopes to present it before hungry readers. I don't mean any disrespect, rather wish you all the best in the future.
2005-10-14


AZ
Lost in confustion, you never know what the cards will deal to you, or what was dealt to the others who share your table. *I don't know why this had to be related to poker* I enjoyed.
2005-10-12


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
hi surei... thanks for leaving me words... i appreciate it very much... xx

your poem:
makes me think this person has burned all bridges with everyone around them and even though they have changed and turned themselves over on a better path in personality, people are not responding to this change all too well... it is all very well to see the light but consequences of actions done in the past are not easily forgotten or mended just because theyve had an epiphany in their life... this is whats prompted in my mind when i read your words here... sorry if im nowhere near in my impressions... i enjoyed this as it gave me a familiar feeling... thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2005-10-12


epohonci
the capital H, does that make "Him" denote God, or merely that special someone, really it's not pinned down by the poem as to the subject, which is cool because the reader can translate it as they see things in their world... nice.
2005-10-11


penfold18
We all have to make changes in our lives and all to often they will affect those around us .
2005-10-11