We have travelled lives

 

We have travelled lives
Built histories without words
Endless endless days

Until now

Your touch
Your eyes

And then only simple words
I love you

 

 





Poetry by efflux
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Written on 2006-12-10 at 23:02

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betsy Firefly
I love you are the three best words when acted out, shown in what we do rather than what we say.
2007-01-01


Zoya Zaidi
It is a very novel wy of expressing you love!
I just love it!
(((hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2006-12-11



It is wonderful when two people finally come home together after such travelled lives. You describe it perfectly. Made me smile, Tai
2006-12-10