Kathy Lockhart
you are beautiful and talented and I am so proud of you my sweet daughter. love you!
2006-12-13

Zainab
I won a in a stroy contest but I didn't want to include becoz thats what are poem for we sometime have to keep the one who are reading keep guesing until the end of the poem he or she shall be asking whats that
The same like i did in my other poems I just like
One of the poem was All the boys loved me you can see the same thing^^

Mood: 5
2006-12-13

Let the poem be.
You are the poet
Not really the poem.
Or perhaps personality
In the peom.

Let me tell you something you might not know, you have to be very careful whenever you are writing anything at all. Yes, you might know that you ca write without telling any story and that's exactly what you've done with this piece. That day, which is today in that poem that 13 made you happy and your spirit soars, you didn't not in any way tell in the poem what really made you happy. Yes you are happy, but I can't visualise what made you happy.

Maybe when you tell the eact thing that made you happy, my tone will change and tell anyother thing.

Language: 2
Format: 2
Mood: 3
Overall: 2
2006-12-13

lastromantichero
then you must be in love Zainab if thats the reason well done on the romantic in this text rgds mike but whatever a lovley poem

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2006-12-13

Zainab
For the first time
I just can't believe this^^

Mood: 5
2006-12-13