The night the moon fell down

 

 

 

 

We are the ones

that left the ground

 

We are the ones

that turned everything

upside down

 

And for a moment

A brief moment

Swept up in currents of love

we felt the overwhelming

sensation of indulgence

 

 We once upon a time left the ground

Ascended and distorted

 the reality of surreal

 

Gave the sword of the spirit

to the humanity 

Brought the gift of untuition

into this world

 

The Gods chased us

to the place where the shadows dwell;

tried to turn us against each other

 

But we had

the fire seed

 in our hearts

and found our way back

But not together

not yet my Love. . .

 

We are the ones

that turned everything

upside down

 

Until we decided to fly

with our broken wings

and we

FELL

FELL  

Fell

fell

fell

down

dwelling on the Threshold

once again; alone. . .





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Written on 2006-12-13 at 21:29

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munir mezyed
Again this is a marvelous poem ...a journey to the mythical world ...if u allow me to edit ur poem as u have words which make the poem not flow...i mean words that u do not need ...

Gave the sword of the spirit
to the humanity
Brought the gift of untuition
into this world



this is how i edit these lines

Giving the sword of spirit
to humanity
Bringing the gift of(intuition)
Into this world


Big toast
Munir mezyed
2006-12-16


Kathy Lockhart
this leaves me breathless. It is visually stunning. I love the phrase "fire seed." Beautiful!
2006-12-13