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It's in you find it!

Whirling waters

lick the rocks

 

As the wind whispers

to the paradise birds

 

Waterfalls giggle

with the water nymphs

chatter

 

A paradise hidden into

the valley of your soul

 

Find it

Become one with the whisper

Become one with the giggle

 

Follow the whisper 

whirl like the water

or dance around the watenymphs

 

A hidden paradise

is waiting for you. . .

 

Find it. . .

~ Ye who seek shall find ~





Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-12-15 at 20:34

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
If I were a cheerleader I would lead a cheer to this poem.
If I were an advise leader I would tell seekers to first take off their adult glasses and seek with their child eyes, which see truth much easier.
If I were a painter I would paint a masterpiece to this poem.
If I were near you I would kiss you on the cheek and say thank you for making my day!
2006-12-17


NotaDeadPoet
So colorful and concrete and creatively imaged.. . . and pithy
2006-12-17


maxmedo
Yeah ye who seek shall find it, i always wonder how much i have to seek and is it enough? How do i measure how much do i have to seek? Do you know? Anyways i always try to smile at things that i dont know believe it works :).....

~MAX~
2006-12-16


Saga
To find the laughter within yourself always seem to be the hardest thing to find!!!
2006-12-16


wee2souls
this poem gives you direction in your words
of encouragement and has a positive charge!!
a bolt of energy!! to find who you are!!
loved this much! a gentle stream and had
a calm flow to it! and a fun read as well!
hugs to you!!
cindy
2006-12-15