Broken

My heart weeps for your love
I can't go on this way
Pretending your love has molded into
my soul
I will go beyond and below where blood flows
and my inner-soul will whiter away
I thought I was your one that you couldn't live without
I thought our love was to last forever

We said our vows that our love would
never die
You lied when you said with this ring
I thee wed
Your heart knew the circle of the bands
would be broken

I want you to know that you killed
my soul
Red drips from these eyes
and the dagger I hold will be forever
in your throat
The grave I dug will be for your body
within a million pieces
You made me do this
I didn't want too
You made the dagger deepen
into your throat
When you told me your love was
for another
You made your own death come
You made me turn this way
Bye forever and I hope you rot in hell




Poetry by wbluerose02
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Written on 2006-12-16 at 00:54

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Zoya Zaidi
Dear WblueRose2, welcome back to the bay! It has been a long time! I just love this poem of yours in your inimmitable style- so fresh and unique! As only you can write!
Do stay and write more!
(((hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2006-12-16


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
I relate to this poem it is powerfully sad and gets the feeling of rejection across so well

Your coueage in writing this is to be commended but the poem is a masterpiece of the art in its own right well done for your bravery well done for the style and the way the text holds the reader

I will book mark this text

and wish you the best rgds Michael
2006-12-16