Is it me dreaming, or loving?


A Dream


In a dream, I started loving you.
We were dancing and playing,
and I covered your cheerful
face with my hands and lips,
and you embraced me with
all your heart. And the sky bent over
to see and take two passengers
in a dream.



Poetry by Dejan
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Written on 2006-12-16 at 19:43

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Amanda K
lovely and emotional. full of affection and sweet desires.

regards,
2007-02-10


sabereh lotfian
Dejan ,this poem has a FABULOUS ending, It makes the reader not to get bored when till the end ,specially specially in long poems:)
"And the sky bent over to see and take two passengers in a dream"
A heart felt poem.

Regards
Sabereh

P.S. thanks for saving me as a writing friend:D
2007-01-12


gills
This was buetiful! Your talent shines through with the simple yet powerful way that you use your words
2006-12-17