am i awake or dreaming?


Elemental Passion

Ice cold, blue eyes
pulling me down;
drowning in a kiss.
Fire skin
burning beneath my fingertips.
Breath blowing in my ear;
whispers barely passing lips.
Grass bending under weight;
a soft bed to lie on.
Dark blankness
with mingled joy;
I don't even know what I feel anymore.




Poetry by Tyr-fira
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Written on 2005-10-18 at 01:15

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whatever you feel, it's just beautiful!
2005-10-18


penfold18
Dreams are what we make of them,yet it appears you have captured one here, well done.
2005-10-18


Ray
Very passionate and sweet. Dreams are reality if you have lived through the emotions. A beautiful piece here. Thanks for taking me through your journey.
2005-10-18


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
you are dreaming, it is all a dream, wrapped in cellophane.

a nice piece, just that e on breathe really standing out.

breathe blowing... - breath blowing.
2005-10-18