Lyrics I wrote. Sound much better when sung.


Dauntless Soul

This no-mans-land we cross, this whole
You worship this place with all your soul
Trees of ash and grass of coal
The toxic fumes have taken their toll

Do not lecture, do not parade
How this wonder place is how dreams were made
Your words and speeches are a facade
How'd you end up in this trade?

*chorus*
Come
Don't you let me down
No please
Don't you let me down
My words
Surpass the speed of sound
Your words
Make scratches in the ground

On the dusty blackened sky
Your fears excused to leave you dry
Your skin looks as if you had died
Your thought is cooked and your heart is fried

*bridge*
Somewhere, somewhere out there
Somewhere, somewhere out there

*chorus*
Come
Don't you let me down
No please
Don't you let me down
My words
Surpass the speed of sound
Your words
Make scratches in the ground







Poetry by weirdzarun
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Written on 2006-12-30 at 19:28

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Have to boomark.

Love the chorus.

liz
2006-12-31



This sends a clear message of rebuilding to me. Complacency has no place in this troubled world of our making for sure! Loving tuneful lyrics, and would also like to hear them. I wonder if Jof could add that facility to PBay?

smiling at you,

Tai
2006-12-30


kath
great lyrics ... makes you think and feel at the same time and that is good .... would as Kathy says love to hear them sung ...

very well done
2006-12-30


Kathy Lockhart
i am amazed at your talent. you are a breath of fresh air. I would love to hear you sing. I bet you and your band have all the girls screaming. lol
People who are not reading you are missing out. I am glad i found you. Rock On and Sing those blues.
2006-12-30