what its like to miss some one




home/you sick

I miss you
Your laugh
Your smile
Your wit
I'm sick of it
I want to be home
Home is were the heart is
And you still have mine
I'm stuck in time
New York New York.......if I can make here?
Moments go to slow
Little images of you I still know

I can't forget
Your memory
Your ghost
The thing I love the most
Will I be purged of your memory
You won't let that happen
You stop me from catchin'


Sweet relief
From you
If only there was some thing I could do

Im here thinking
I want to be there
With you



Poetry by philip reis
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Written on 2007-02-13 at 03:57

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Forest
i think i can feel your despair. What a good reading. I am also far from people I love, so this poem is especially close for me. I love the title too.
Forest
2007-03-18


Amanda K
the sweet feeling of missing you talking loudly here

all the best
2007-03-17


betsy Firefly
This is a text worth reading, for it inspires me to write about hope!
2007-03-06


Callisto Jean
I like the short and direct lines. To me, it shows the urgency coming from the narrator. At the same time, word choice emitts a lonely vibe. Creat combination! The rhyme scheme was fun too. XD

Um...you said 'suck' instead of 'stuck'. Sorry, I just found it a little distracting. Also, I tried looking up cachin. (I can't find it.) What does it mean? I'm a bit of a word freak.

Ah, I forgot to mention I'm fond of the last bit 'cause I'm a romantic like that. ;D
2007-03-01