The feeling when a loved one is not there


Love Haiku by M.A.Meddings for Thomas and Elizabeth's challenge

Life in your absence
Is darkening of the sun
In twilight's sadness 



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Written on 2007-01-15 at 07:22

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Rob Graber
Touching piece, Mike!
PS: The last line needs "twilight's."
2007-01-15



true...when the one you love is not near you, even the brightest star could not light up your life...
Lilly xxx
2007-01-15


Kathy Lockhart
yes, you said is beautifully.
2007-01-15


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
This is beautiful and describes
the feeling of missing someone perfectly.

BOOKMARKED IN MY FAVES.

Liz.
2007-01-15