Thomas wrote the first line and I wrote line two and three. We are talking about how short time seems when you're with someone special.


The Brevity of Time[A co-written Haiku with Thomas Perdue]


Before we must part
Eight hours seem too short a time
Whenever we're online

16/01/07



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Written on 2007-01-16 at 09:08

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beauty in all the technology. understandable, emotion was well felt.

~Kiva

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2007-01-18