with nepenthes.


ignition.

an inspiration just fell out of my head
it came out of some spark over there
i hope it isn't dead, yet
when all is said and done with the sun
we will all freeze in the nuclear winter of man
was it planned all along with that sing-a-long?

or just perhaps a hymn of the new republic
that transpires, as poets conspire 'round evolution
perhaps they found solutions in ablution's confusion
listening to a moonlight sonata in b flat
while i write my broken memories of yesterday

today is a perfect day for thought, is it not?



Poetry by Zachary P. B.
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Written on 2007-01-18 at 05:12

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Arti
Yes, today is a "gut" day for thought. Especially when two of my favorite poets do an amazing co-write. Seamless blend! :)
2007-01-18


salem
oh this is so beautiful one
i like it so much
thanxxxxxxxxx
2007-01-18


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
It is a perfect day for though....
You will have to explain the second stanza
to me, I got confused by the third line
"perhaps they found solutions in ablution's confusion"
is sounds good...but I do not know
what you mean by it...

Liz
2007-01-18


Kathy Lockhart
I love this co-write! You two mesh so seamlessly. Yes, it is a good day for thought and for reading some great poetry.
2007-01-18