Feel free

feel free
to rant and rave
take a shot
maybe even throw
a punch
I speak the truth
the truth
that you don't like
you are under
no obligation
to read
and comment
the problem
is that
in our world
we hide behind
flattery
fakeness
insincerity
when the truth
is pointed out
we lose our minds
I will never cease
to speak the truth
to say
what is on my mind
feel free
to rant and rave
feel free to
hurl abuse
but the truth
oh yes
the truth
it must prevail



Poetry by matthew chilufya
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Written on 2007-01-30 at 10:33

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josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Mathew, it would seem that you knowingly set up a worthless piece of prose as a test to prove your point, initially. Then when it was reviewed by other members in a less than nasty way you pounced. Was that your intent from the beginning or did you truly feel that "gratitude" was worthy of constructive comment?
2007-01-30