Sometimes the answer is right under us.


Yesterday the Sewers Broke Free!

Yesterday, the sewers broke free





They blasted from reason and cursed at the young!





Yesterday, the sewers believe





The only real message is always unsung





Yesterday the sewers broke free





The man with the rifle stood up and he ran





Yesterday the sewers concieved





Washing away the Earth's oily gland




Yesterday the Sewers Broke Free!




The wicked and lonely cried out to the sky!





Yesterday the Sewers Broke Free!





Benevolent missions were all left behind!




Yesterday the Sewers Broke Free!




All the achievement had killed who created!




Yesterday the Sewers Broke Free!




All of the shit had whipped those who had made it!
















Today, all the sewers have gone




A suicide message that still wasn't sung



Poetry by weirdzarun
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Written on 2007-02-02 at 00:52

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Karen Canning
the repetition in this piece makes it very powerful
2007-02-08


kath
clever .. and has its effect .... !!!

I feel the force ..

best wishes kath
2007-02-02


Kathy Lockhart
Michael i have read this about 4 times and with each reading it becomes stronger and stronger. The repetition creates an intensity. I have a few people that I would like whipped by their own creation of shit. I'm tired of smelling and enduring the waste products of their nasty lives.
2007-02-02



It works but couplets closer together would ease the flow for the reader imo. Yes it is all under our very own noses and feet. Cool work, smiling at you Tai
2007-02-02