What if. . . (one line)

 

love was a bird, would it land on your shoulder?





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Written on 2007-02-05 at 01:30

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Damon
I write some short ones, but I don't think I have ever written one this short. I love it! Excellent work my friend! Simply Excellent!
Damon
2009-04-28



Ah, birds and poetry ... always hand in hand.

Really lovely one liner this!
2009-02-21


Eli
Love is a bird, and when we are gentle and still, it will want to land on our shoulder and nibble playfully on our ear. Thanks for this thought-and-heart provoking line.
2009-01-30


lisamarie
cute
2009-01-29


Damon
I don't know what love is, but it definitely found my heart when I met my wife. Even after 37 years of marriage we are still very much in love--I don't think a bird could last that long.
I love this one-liner.
Damon
2008-10-18


Stan Cooper
If love was a bird, I'd rush out and purchase some bird seed to
sprinkle on both my shoulders...

Lovely question which made for a lovely poem

Stan
2008-02-04


Inspired
Aw! I'm blown away!
This is a beautiful thought
2007-05-14


Amanda K
if love was a bird it will land on your shoulder
and feel even fonder for it landed

lovely one
2007-03-17


Will
Beautiful Expression..
2007-02-28


Saga
Live to anticpate, never the other way around!!!
2007-02-28


Karen Canning
very powerful they say least said is most powerful, I wonder if it landed on my shoulder it would be love, maybe it would be peace

huggs
karenxx
2007-02-27


Karoline
This was a cool and creative line,
brilliant even, I wouldn't have thought of that.
I enjoyed it and will read more by you :)
2007-02-07


Rob Graber
Better that than peck my heart out! ;-,?
2007-02-05


Dan Cederholm
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Wonderful one line poem . . .

And with so much strenght and if love

was a bird then I know it sits on my

shoulder already . . .

All the best to you, Dan

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2007-02-05


kath
I too love thes one -liners --leaving space for inmagination ...

and this image of the bird of love is a beautiful image ...

and I agree with the comment of Kathy Lockhart .... if we all when love comes to us would just let it spread ....each time that beautiful bird lands on our shoulder ,, hey what a wonder .................

a beautiful one liner
best wishes
kath
2007-02-05


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
I love your one line poetry. I do so hope and believe that this beautiful bird lands on my shoulder and stays a life time. And, I also hope that I could give birth to this bird who lands on the shoulder of others. I believe each time love lands upon us we have a responsibility to multiply it and send love out again. What a beautiful world we would have if it were so.
2007-02-05


kaytee
it's simple and complicated at the same time. i love it.
2007-02-05