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The last Kiss by M.A.Meddings

If this
Were our last kiss
You would remember it
Just For its tender gentleness
Always





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-02-07 at 11:12

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Judy T Lloyd
You are correct we definetly will remember it and always.
2007-02-12


CC
the utilisation of the structure in this leaves me breathless.. It is brilliant and you capture so much emotions in these few lines
2007-02-11


BellaLaluna
when i close my eyes
i dream about a kiss like that:)


nice:)
2007-02-11


Amanda K
lovely and romantic.
2007-02-10


BlueyedSoul
a kiss received by such as you would surely cure my plight, a beautiful piece dear michael
~blue xox
2007-02-08


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Awwwhhhh, this gets me right in the gut! That's where the heart really is you know.
2007-02-07


Kathy Lockhart
this is beautiful Michael. It has a bittersweet quality about it for I can imagine the sweetness of the kiss but then for it to be the last one has me a bit sad. So, here are a few more xxx....Now I feel better. : )
2007-02-07


kath
those kisses do not ever fall from our hearts and can be recalled when ever we chose ... ...

sweetness that is sad and beautiful ....
2007-02-07



Of course, hero! A last kiss is always something to remember!
2007-02-07


Broken Foot
Nice little poem here. About a thing to remember. One sure doesn't forget things like that!
2007-02-07



I hope
this ain't the end
of your sweet tease, my friend,
since only you made Erato
surrend...

Lilly xxx
2007-02-07