Seascape

When she smiles, blue eyes twinkles
Plumb glows with elegance dimples.
Once I glanced and lost inside her eyes,
Like abyss sea: her splendid eyes.
In depth of her eyes love signaled shine,
Feeling of true and tender love, I imagine.
From such sentiment scene, no way to escape,
Oh! How enchanting she is like a god seascape.
When she smiles heart seized and lock in eyes,
And I forgot to express poem in empty page.
Poem blends with her beautiful smile reason,
Like a cuckoo chant mingles with spring season.
When she smiles, motionless every one stands,
And rhapsodizes, she is a lass from fairyland.





Poetry by Tsewang Dorjee9
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Written on 2007-02-19 at 11:31

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betsy Firefly
Someone is in love with a fairy-like blue-eyed beauty!!
2007-02-19


CC
your dictions flows amazingly.. the rhythm is brilliant and your rhymes are well developed.
2007-02-19


isabel
hi, this is one of the geatest i have read so far very much in tune and blended perfectly.. i felt the lost you were saying in her eyes.. LOOKING TRUE ONE'S EYE YOU CAN TOUCH THE SOUL!! VERY GOOD MY FRIEND!! KEEP IT UP!!
2007-02-19