If you ever watched the 'gymnastic' antics of Deborah Winger and Richard Gere in the film 'An Officer and a Gentleman' you will know what this is about
I tried to treat the subject delicately  


In The Silent Darkness Of The Room by M.A.Meddings

In the silent darkness of the room
I lay and watched my dreams of love
And in the twilight's bewitching hour 
I remembered you delightedly 
Your simple gasps of ecstasy ensured
That your gentle love became me
Then in my glorious reverie
I recalled that most enchanting sound
A  gentle whispering  song that was our passion
And it was wonderfully embodied
In the movement of the chair rhythmically creaking





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-02-20 at 13:16

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
Yes, seen the movie, a little over the line for me visually, I like my mind to do the work. So, I appreciate your poem much more than the visual aid of the movie! Lovely and delicately put.
2007-02-21


Kathy Lockhart
I just watched that movie yesterday. Wow! I have that scene vividly imprinted on my brain. And you Dear Hero have described the ambiance so well. xxxyb
2007-02-20