Conversations with Cindymac about our friendship and deeply felt spiritual connection inspired this piece.


God Whispers

God whispers in the breeze
His breath sweet with His love
Blowing upon our spirits. Listen
Do you hear it? Music rising, filling
The silence of a broken heart
With beautiful peace unyeilding
And forever revealing
The healing balm of his love.

Kathy Lockhart
3/1/07







Poetry by Kathy Lockhart
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Written on 2007-03-01 at 17:28

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betsy Firefly
God's balm - the only soothing a person needs alone or in friendship. However, true friendship has its root in God's love, just like love between lovers, don't you think?

A peaceful read.
2007-03-03


Colin Skilton
Hello Kathy.
They say a marraige lasts for a lifetime(Sometimes!) but friendship lasts forever.
What a tribute to your friendship and the deep spiritual side.
Such deep openess is a reard of trust and love and the joy of true friendship.
I enjoyed this very much
Bless you for sharing with us all.
Colinxx
2007-03-02


Karen Canning
a truly inspirational piece Kathy your words bring it to life

huggs
karenxx
2007-03-02


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Katherine this is a very beautiful poem about the friendship you and Cindy mac find in each other and of your inspiring love of God well done
i found this awesome
huds and rgds Michael xxxxykl
2007-03-02


brian paglia
Hey you,it's been awhile and please know that over the past month or so,I have not only thought of you but have included you in my prayers.
I have been traveling the nation and working but glad to be back in front of the computer and catching up on your pieces,which are awesome as always.
I hope all is well for you and yours and look forward to hearing from ya.
God bless you and have a wonderful night!
2007-03-02


kath
your poem is intself such a whisper..............

an outstanding beautiful and tender write

best wishes
kath
2007-03-01


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Such a hopeful, peaceful, assuring poem. It brings to mind the wonderful words of Blessed Assurance, one of the most hopefilled hymns ever written.
2007-03-01


Will
Nicely Written Dear Kathy...
2007-03-01


Callisto Jean
I thoroughly enjoyed how you broke the poem up. It had a great impact on the flow. It was very calm, peaceful, and gentle...just like God. :)

I enjoyed the incorporation of music and the broken heart and how you described them. I'm not sure if you meant the internal rhyme when you were describing the music but I liked it.

I also want to draw attention to how you incorporate the readers with the question "Listen/Do you hear it?". It makes it more personal that you're reaching out and interacting with your readers.

Great job,
Cj.
2007-03-01