A question of whether you have the loyalty for another human under torture to save their benefit. - 02 November 2005


Hide and seek.

I might let you live,
I might not.
I don't mind guilt,
So shall I cut?
Pay your debt,
Pay it now!
A rein of terror,
Thorn or vow?
A ticket to fear,
The ticket back.
I'll wait 'til pay,
Patience to hack.
Dorm of the future,
Hide and seek.
Pores of justice,
Want to leak.




Poetry by John Ashleigh
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Written on 2005-11-02 at 16:55

Tags Threat  Loyalty 

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Daybreaker
The flow in this one is exceptional! It just flows into your eyes, up to the brain and lands like a cloud, soft and gentle.
2005-11-14


Ray
You're good! Keep writing. Powerful, short and to the point. Thanks.
2005-11-02


Zoya Zaidi
'Dorm of the future,
Hide and seek.
Pores of justice,
Want to leak.'
This is powerful!!
Keep it up John!!!
2005-11-02


penfold18
Pretty heavy stuff john but i like it, as to the morality of it who would want to be in that position , not i for one.
2005-11-02