Lover's Beginning

As winter's harshness bids goodbye
And white clouds roll with springtime sun
We catch each others' twinkling eye
Knowing true love has now begun

As blossomed buds burst into bloom
The air is filled with fragrant scent
And flowers dance to passion's tune
While lovers sway to hearts' content

Silken raindrops run down our skin
Gentle breath escapes in surprise
Bodies made velevt with each kiss
Rise in wonder to touch the skies

Slowly, nature's sounds become still
Sun's shadow leaves for midnight sky
And while the earth lulls into sleep
Love's energy leaps and runs high





Poetry by Kiran
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Written on 2007-03-07 at 12:51

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Individuality
passions tune - passion's tune
hearts content, here i assume you are speaking hearts plural so perhaps a semi-colon to indicate a pause? hearts; content or maybe hearts' content. just those two sections really where i was given pause in the flow of reading, other than that all good :)
2007-03-07



You describe new lovers so perfectly. Thanks for reminding me, we could all do with remembering...Tai
2007-03-07