10th, March Uprising Day

March 10th is the uprising day of days,
Our valiant people sacrifice life on this day.
For the sake of Tibet's freedom ray,
To free from Red Chinese subjugation,
"Brave people "plant" sovereign seeds"
Some were wounded and some fell dead,
A very high price then was paid
From the core of our heart, we revered.
Every blood of our people that dropped
A sacrifice of untold events made us mad.
Red Chinese marched with tanks and guns
Killing people old and children, monks and nuns
Destroying temples, cultural, historical heritage
Now we will find only in our history pages.
March 10th is the uprising day,
Let us begin with new style head and age,
Like acid reaction quick action ablaze,
Prepare to die, mission deep and high,
Close your eyes march means die or kill
To free Tibet, an answer to end uprising day,





Poetry by Tsewang Dorjee9
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Written on 2007-03-10 at 03:56

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kid
Memory will long run for ever u have told and reminded your people who they are and where there are coming from. i like this poem
2007-03-10



My heart goes out to you and your people. A wonderful tribute to the free spirit of those that died on that day of their Uprising.

Well done

Tai
2007-03-10


Wangdi Gyalpo
Dear Tsewangla
I just wish to tell you that I am very pleased to read your poetry published in this site, masseyuniversity site and phayul. I am glad that you are exploring different poetry portals. These site will help you to attain stardom.

Furthermore, I am glad to read all those suggestion, which you have received regarding your poetry particularly by one member from phayul.... it is really helpful for you and try to rectify as per the suggestion provided by that person. However, I must also tell you that you should not rectify your poetry blindly on someone's suggestion as you are the one who composed it and you know it what is best.

One Small suggestion: As far as possible try to publish only one poem in any poetry journal/portal per day as this will help you to get more feedback in each and every poetry of yours. Its like if you have one sweet in your hand and if you offer it to somebody, that person will take the same however, if you have many then others will be very selective... in that case some of your poetry may be neglated. Take care...

I will be back soon....
till then take care

Sincerely yours

Wangdi Gyalpo

and yes, I really miss that word, ' Chik.......' you know what i mean.. he he.
2007-03-10