Life Without You

Alone in hell, I have nowhere to turn
Memories of you, my love you spurn
Unseen forces brought us together
My heart is scarred, broken forever
In my dreams, I feel your touch
My heart is full, never so much
Time heals all wounds, this is a lie
My soul is lost, wanting to die
With broken pieces, I shall carry on
Crying forever with what's left undone



Poetry by Yummy_guy
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Written on 2007-03-10 at 22:33

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Autie
Deeply moving piece. Though, yummy guy, cheer up! I felt compelled to hug the writer or the person feeling this and say;

Today is all you have,
Leave tears to the eve of tomorrow,
Leave regret in yesterday, where it was born.

I love the words used, it is very good at achieving the sad despair of a utterly broken spirit and heart. Use that ability to write uplifting anecdotes.

Great Job!

P.s: Read a bit fo mine too :)
2007-03-18


Amanda K
lovely but reminded of a poem i read b4.

all the best
2007-03-11