Can I write, fly with you? (Co-write with KJC)

Can I see with your eyes?

Your insightful lines
catalyst, generating
our thoughts for you,
This is what I put together
by adding too much
but enough for you,
I welcome you to make
whatever changes,
then let's see
if that is what we want.
You have a wonderful
way with words,
I am sure we will
be both happy.
Let our minds fly off
where oft they do, too oft alone
to soar beyond mere words
through aether regions
long untried by wings
mine strongly tied to strength of winds
where often fled I clouds to hide within.
I will to wing on wing,
with hand in hand -
write and fly WITH YOU
to explore all those - ahh,
wonderful places
where words have taken me
where words have taken you
exploring. . .
adventures...
What do you think?
What airforce wings
full powered love
for natures's gifts by Muses left
I know.
Let us Jetstream on Eagles wings
Aurora's northern rainbow flow
through blinding lights of open eyes
to darkness of those winter skies
a stream of consciousness where lies
a breath of fresh poetic air -
or take a Helicopter ride t
hat hovers still by mountain side
to feel the awesome ridges rise
and swirl through vertigo's vortex
grasping words like Seize the Day
might have created less a chore
until you reached out wings aloft
and gave me strength renewed your gift
that kept aloft my hopes to fly
to see with keener poet's eye
so flight alone with my own lift
by air streaming
by just dreaming
in perfect symmetry
I filled with faith
the eagles
in flight here by your side.







Poetry by NotaDeadPoet
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Written on 2007-03-11 at 13:46

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Amanda K
words here dance happily.a very good text.
2007-03-25


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a beautiful poem from you two and glad to see
these cowrite coming forth again

well done rgds mike
2007-03-11