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. . .And. . .But. . . When. . .(the harp)

 

 

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. . .And she whispered a thought

and ascended from the world of feelings

to the world of thought. . .

 

. . .And she felt a sharp pain in her right kidney,

the source of her fears was now revealed. .  .

 

. . .And she understood. . .when you are brave enough

to just feel and enjoy the feeling you experience

you feed your mind and heart with hope, peace, love. . .

 

. . . But when you escape to the world of thought. . .

that means that you are afraid to be hurt. . .

 

. . . And you feed your mind and heart . . .

with misstrust, war,  hate. . . Fear - the source of all evil. . . 

 

. . .And she returned. . . thinking and feeling. . .

Alfa = Love, Omega = Hate

- The eternal return of the humankind?

She simpered and kept looking at the wall of visions. . .

 Life - All there is, she whispered and

 start playing her harp - nature's harmonic song. . .

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Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-03-18 at 14:00

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V.V.Ramesh
great poem well expressed:)
Rate:5
2007-03-19


nature
oh and i love the picture
2007-03-19


nature
beautiful
emotions make us human
great poem
2007-03-19


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
:D yep, another one :) before reading, i thought the title was intriguing... then i saw :) i think you're right about thoughts vs. feelings ... rang true to me when i read... thoughts are especially prolific in times of fear, and can certainly make you stop from doing anything... escaping things... and spending too much time on your own with the thoughts usually results in negative outcomes against yourself, really nothing that helps to go forward and enjoy living in all its experiences... these are the thoughts that came to my mind with this... profound thinking... these are really nice to read night... :) *hugs* xx
2007-03-19


Hagzissa
"- The eternal return of the humankind?"

Your poem is so delicate since it breathes hope. I like it, a lot!
*applauds*
2007-03-18


Kathy Lockhart
Dear Carmen, your writing moves on a different plane. It breathes. It lives. It awakens the spirit. I felt chills as this entered into me. It touches yet is untouchable. However, it allows itself to be felt. (((hugs))))
2007-03-18



It is true, we have to trust our heart and live and love in the now, no matter what doubts plague our searching minds. Excellent poem and I adored the title NSW...well done indeed, a poem of universal wealth in loving experience.

Smiling at you,

Tai
2007-03-18


salem
nice done
loved yr words
thanx
2007-03-18


Gopi
now night soul woman on right track. nice piece. but sometimes jumps out of the window and runs away from the kingdom of heart.
2007-03-18