Ethereal Mistress


Ethereal mistress unfurl your wings
and lay me on the earth
gather spring and kiss the day
teach my soul to dance
let me fade into the stars
and gently touch my heart
for it is time for me to leave
yet grant me one more chance
to take your hand
and taste the rain
that angels cried that day
the day i held you in the storm
and gave my life away.


© Rik - 22/03/2007




Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-03-22 at 20:35

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Mr.Mist
A wery well writen poem from you..as I alway think!!! A bit of a sad ending, but it was really nice reading!!!

-mr.m
2007-03-23


Saga
What a beautiful and sweet serenade!!

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2007-03-23



Gorgeous, beautifully flowing love poem rik, it made me want to skip!lol Smiling at you, Tai

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2007-03-22


Kathy Lockhart
this is a beautiful piece of poetry filled with images and feelings that caused me to sigh in its presence
2007-03-22