F.i.in.e Moods
serenity spoke here for sure... that's exactly the word i would have used to describe the feeling your poem created within... makes me think of that silence you can share with a person where discomfort is a total ghost and unfelt... being able to share that kind of silence with someone, there's nothing that compares to it... that's what your text made me think about... words can certainly be superfluous in certain moments... well captured, and very beautiful... i enjoyed this :) *hugs* xx
2007-03-26

Karen Canning
this one speaks volumes, is woven and wrapped in love

huggs
karenxx
2007-03-25

Phyllis J. Rhodes
Oh, I can just see two lovers, deeply in love staring lost into each others eyes, smiling in contentment, feeling safe with their deepest feelings shared. A wonderful scene here, a wonderful write.
2007-03-23

seda
wonderfully written

i think serenity has the confussion and all the noices that we can not hear.''The silence hides the untold words'' :) (my poem: lost dreams in the night)


love,
Seda
2007-03-23

yes to be wrapped in this way, is the only way. Serenity comes within those words never needing to be uttered. Love needs no words and the eyes express so perfectly. I shine when I think of my loves. Smiling at you, shining right now, Tai in love
2007-03-23

penfold18
Absolutely beautiful, some actions are louder then words.
2007-03-23

lastromantichero
wow
the power of the eyes to express what is in your heart and in your mind does often transmit into a beautiful tinglingof the body and bring peace
i see the eyes of a beautiful lady in my dreams and know exactly what you mean

minds you come to think of it

you have pretty eyes your self lololol

maybe a kiss sweet miss will melt you heart xxxxxx lololol ylk

Michael
2007-03-23

Gopi
wow. beautiful. It is not silence. It is a volcano in offing.Once it errupts tremors are ..................?.
2007-03-23

Saga
Some things are better left unsaid when the body does all the talking!!!
2007-03-23