over rain


Rain

Rain rain

making road

A darty lake...!



Haiku by otteri selvakumar
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Written on 2005-11-09 at 16:10

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Brenna
I believe a haiku poem is supposed to have 5 syllables in the first sentence 7 in the second and 5 in the third. So I think you could fix this up a bit. This was a bit too much on the simple side also.
2005-11-10