In Your Black Hour Of Need

Who can you turn to
When you are feeling down?
Will anyone pick you up
When life has kicked you to the ground?
What will heal the wound of
A knife stuck in your heart or back?
Where can you find a guiding light
When encroaching darkness is on a relentless attack?

You can turn to me, I can help
Even if away I am far,
Keep holding on, I'll priece your blackness
With the light of my brightly burning star.
I do not pretend to know
How tough it is for you,
But to help and make you happy again
Everything in my power I will try to do.

I don't know if, in
Returning your smile I will suceed.
But know that I will stick by you
And wipe your tears in your black hour of need.

24/03/07




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-03-27 at 05:12

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Overall: 5 2011-05-28


montana
thats awsome. i really like that

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2007-08-30


-ibm The PoetBay support member heart!
a lot of heart in this... friendship like that is priceless... and your words, carry that feeling of love and care, genuine hopes and support through hardships a loved-one is going through... letting them know, you're there for them whenever and always... wonderfully expressed... truly touching poem... *hugs* xx
2007-03-29


lastromantichero
this poem is a beautiful testament to your burgeoning skill as a poet
well done rgds mike
2007-03-28


Zachary P. B.
very good write here, compassionate.

z.
2007-03-27


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
your poetry is becoming so rich Liz. Love is good for the poetic soul.
2007-03-27



Such a sweet confirmation, is all a person could ask for. He is a lucky young man. One line got me, 'Even if away I am far' would sound better as, 'Even if I am far away' but that is just my opinion and it is your poem. Just a thought. Well done.

Smiling at you

Tai

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2007-03-27


Mitzi
Wow!...this really good!!! i dont know what to say about it. my life is so messed up i dont know what to do anymore. anyways...keep up the wonderful work Liz!...love you like a sis!
M.

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