Inspired by Zoya's "At the Cross Roads"


You are a gentle, blooming flower.[For Zoya]

At Life's crossroads
You now stand
And you're wondering
Where you went wrong,

A gloomy tune of broken
Promises and dreams
By you is being sung

But my dear friend
that shadow of dark can't hide
your beautiful golden heart.

Crossroads of life there are many
And difficult choices
Too we have to make
But you are a gentle, blooming flower
That no gale of disaster can break.

You may feel that
You have failed
Slipped up in the
Choices you made,

Yet although there are
Dark clouds around you
They will not last forever

As nothing on this Earth
Can hide the warmth
That radiates from your soul.

Crossroads of life there are many
And difficult choices
Too we have to make
But you are a gentle, blooming flower
That no gale of disaster can break.

28/03/07




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-03-28 at 09:43

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yoonoos peerbocus
a good poem
2007-04-01


Zoya Zaidi
With friends like you dear Lizzy,
Who can remain gloomy for long?
You who are there to boost my morale,
Can only make me feel better on this day.
Your words speak of your large heart,
Who feels for a friend, and uplifts her spirit.
May God bless you dear friend!
I am already feeling much better now!

(((Big fond hugs for a very, very beautiful and technically perfect poem, dear Lizzy!)))

Thanks for the Birthday greetings!
Love, Zoya

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2007-03-31


kath
A lovely poem Liz, for the lovely Zoya!

best wishes
kath
2007-03-28


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
your poem celebrates the joy and friendsgip this lovely lady has given us over the past years
rgds mike well done
2007-03-28