A song/poem written with |Elton John - Saturday night`s alright| playing in the back of my head..


Secrets (before I break)

Holding on tight to your secrets darling
A closed down little dreamer's crime
Sweet as little roses in a secret garden
Will you let me in when you find time?

I'm getting tired of this harsh vibration
Of looking into empty crates
I'm feeling fine with your explanations
So tell me now for heavens sake

Leave my hanging on all my patience
Every fucking doorbell rings
I'm on a to doorsteps close to crazy
Please now baby let me in

I break my bones to get under your skin
But all I really find is flesh
I'm sick of being inside your temptation
Stop me from this instant crash

You keep me hanging from a silk-rope honey
I'm begging won't you let me down
So into you I'm being left in horror
How can you spin me all around?

Do you believe that I'll never know it?
I'm reading every move you make
I really need all your explanations
Tell me now before I break

Leave my hanging on all my patience
Every fucking doorbell rings
I'm on a to doorsteps close to crazy
Please now baby let me in

I break my bones to get under your skin
But all I really find is flesh
I'm sick of being inside your temptation
Stop me from this instant crash




Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2007-04-12 at 22:07

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2009-06-20


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
I was editing my bookmarks
and re-found this ( that's
the trouble with having
so many fave poems/writers lol)

I can act hear the EJ song tune
and your words fit the tune
extremely well.

~L.~
2008-09-19


Amanda K
strong one that makes anyone moves.

thx
2007-04-21


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
I love Elton john's music.

This is beautifully penned.

BOOKMARKED.

L.,
2007-04-13



There are nothing more weighing than secrets Cr4zy, especially those not maintained. Love the title and hope she lets you in. Smiling at you, Tai
2007-04-12