Well it made me smile :-)

Screech Eye - (Jabberwocky challenge)

Screech Eye soarbling
through glimmer sky
ratchety cry.

my little Gleebes
it's time for Screech
to gorge and feed.

Gangling through the treacle time
fixafied on Screech's eye
whooosh come gambling
talons scythe
heart all mumbly
no where to hide.

my little Gleebes
Screech is soarbling
and it's time to feed.

Hide beneath the sharpy tree
quibbling gangling cheepy Gleebes
hold your breath and do not sneeze
for Screech Eye is soarbling
and he will sliver your spleen.

© Rik - 02/05/2007

Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-05-08 at 19:12

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:-)))) This is so cool! I love the challenge too, though I'm not sure I can write anything like that in English.

Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Love this Rik - was reading the Jabberwocky poem the other day - thanks for posting this

Elle x

lol this is so funny Rik, it reads brilliantly. It certainly made me smile too, so what is this challenge then?lol Tai

F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
:D so much fun... made me smile too, but i still say it needs to be read aloud with theatrical rendering in the reciting hehe ;) :) *hugs* xx