A tanka expressing love


Missing You by M.A.Meddings

Missing you today
The gentlest thoughts about thee
Please return fill me
Bring back the light to my days
Your loving knight doth love ye  

 





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-05-07 at 07:57

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M Heathcote
Your lance is true and strait
Lord Knight of the realm
Your steed is a soul mate
Rode to overwhelm!
A damsel that'll one day,
Be your for queen
A damsel that'll one day,
Be your own sweet Colleen!
2007-05-09


Michelle Panter
You really do live up to your name, don't you.. lastromantichero? Brilliant piece, just LoVe It!!
2007-05-08


Kathy Lockhart
And I am nothing without your flame that burns within me giving me the light doth shine upon thee. Soon I will return and your love will fill my heart to overflowing and I will pour out my love upon thee. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyb
2007-05-07


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
A beautiful tanka that describes the pain of love so well!*applause*
2007-05-07


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful Mike, but remember, that each day, even though apart, brings you closer to destiny

Elle x
2007-05-07


she
My heart has been totally melted!!!!
2007-05-07



well, sir knight...your love for thy queen seems to consume you completely...and you have such a beautiful way of showing it!
Lilly xxx
2007-05-07



"Please return fill me"
A beautiful line that says it all, hero!
2007-05-07


seda
Thy work shines like a star :)

So beautiful and brilliant...

Regards,
Seda
2007-05-07