just some thoughts going through my head.


A Darker Poem....

My motivation,
My inspiration,
My sorrow and pain,
All seem to be one in the same.

The darkness that fosters inside,
The pain I cannot hide,
The visions that I see,
Have all become a part of me.

The words I cannot speak,
My world, ever more bleak,
The emotions I cannot express.
I must force myself to suppress.

Ever searching, never finding,
Wish I could go forward instead of rewinding,
Confusion clouds my consciousness,
Its torture is ever relentless.

The hope that gives me reason to believe,
Does nothing other than deceive,
The things I must do, the places I must go,
And the depths of my mind, no one will know.



Poetry by TeeTee
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Written on 2007-06-08 at 04:51

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Michael Dyst
despite the slightly cliché-like approach (4-line verses, rhyming etc.) there is something of value here, but it's like a beast bound by the chains of having-to-do-things-a-certain-way-to-make-it-a-poem...

especially in the 4th verse, that's almost Tolkien-like in a weird but interesting way..
2007-06-08