This poem was engendered by the moment I first saw the beauty of her


Do You See My Love Tremble by M.A.Meddings

Do you see my love tremble 
As I stand in awe of your beauty 
Helplessly transfixed 
By your silken love 
And you with mine 
Two souls lost in twilight zone 
Daring not to speak 
Longing to touch 
Yet  desisting 
For how momentarily
Can you catch the beauty of a rose 
Without silence




Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-06-15 at 07:15

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limber junctionson
do you mean like someone will continue to take the money if he can whilst having a donation point that works continually?
oh shush!
I must only listen to grief!
2008-06-14


limber junctionson
thanks for comments wee2souls.
In response I will explain myself.

I have no interest about your life really.
In all honesty
Nor you in me...

For me poetbay is a place where I share my work.
Maybe I could be considered harsh but Im old enough to know each and every one of us here that is breathing has a history.
What else would we draw on that enables us to write?
I ask the question though are we poets or are we fan clubs?

I would be very happy to see a Mr Meddings place on the bay.
I always enjoyed his work.

What i do object to is for his loss to be paraded.
I understand the need for comfort but in my humble opinion this is best done in private messaging.

I do have concerns also if it his family's wish to have his words used right now.

I ask these questions most respectfully.

And am interested in any responses.
I do not respond to tirades though.

Linda
2008-06-11


limber junctionson
Im sorry but I find the posting of this work worrying.
We have been told that Mr Meddings has expired.
Surely it is only decent to wait until his estate and subsequent copywrite issues are established in law before his work is brought forward in this way.
2008-06-10


Kathy Lockhart
My darling, I tremble still for you. You are my all, my everything, the joy that I hold on to is the knowledge that we will be together again. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyblyvm
2008-06-10


Lea Foverskov
i only write of the destruction of love and how love can never happen - and yet here you are, defying me so that i bow to thee. wondrous piece, oh joy of love!!
2007-06-15



Spotlessly beautiful, hero! I especially loved the last 3 lines of this poem. You are definitely on fire!
2007-06-15



beautiful, dear Michael! the two of you are a wonderful couple!
Lilly xxx
2007-06-15


Kathy Lockhart
This beautiful poem literally takes my breath away. I am in awe of it and of you and our love. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyb
2007-06-15