Just the intention matters! :)


The Little Cloud

The little cloud, wandering in the sky
alone ...
wondering if she would be of any help ,
looking over the vast desert .

down there...
nothing but some burnt palm trees
with their dried leaves fallen around...
thus the little cloud cried
so very sad.

crying in the sky
she disapeared soon
that you may think
there was never a cloud!

yet a young sprout
was there to become a life,

the memory of the little cloud:)





Poetry by sabereh lotfian
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Written on 2007-08-01 at 09:43

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Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
A gem of a poem I've only just found,
Looking forward to reading more.
Regards Alan.
2023-05-02



Wonderful! Bookmarking this beauty here.
2010-02-28


melanie sue
I like this too, even though I am just now reading it. It is beautiful and sweet in its conception. Thank you for sharing your talent. This was a very enjoyable poem with a very universal message. :)
2009-10-17


Achernar
A most unusual and touching poem! So few words, but you have expressed a potent emotion of sadness mixed with hope. I loved it!
2009-07-24


Jack R. Schade
Your text showed that there truly can be a silver lining to every cloud. I would appreciate getting your opinion on some of my material.
Cheers,
Jack
2009-07-08


chuma okafor
Simply lovely...cheers!
2009-06-19


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
I will also agree. There is something sweet and angelic going on in your words. A nice intention - it is all that matters, yes. Thank You. :)
2009-05-28


Dejan
I agree,

this is an angel's poem.

Thank You, Sabereh.
2008-08-21


Sabrina
Beautiful my friend, absolutely beautiful! :)

Hugs,
Sabrina
2008-05-12


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
beautiful thoughts beautifully written....
I, now, will always look at a little cloud, wondering...and
it's thanks to you...

xxxx Stan
2007-10-09


exitmusic4afilm
Ah, there is always positive hidden within the negative. The key is knowing to look for it.
2007-09-02


Farag M. Afify
Deep pure feelings. You're an angel poetess.
2007-08-10