My mom and I don't have a special godd relationship, and one of those days when we had a row I wrote this poem. I think the text is very good, and it explains alot. My mom has not seen it, yet, and some part of me wants her to see it, and an other part w


Dear mom (Don't kill me with those eyes)

Dear mom
Please don't look at me with those eyes
I know in past I have told too many lies
But I try, I try really hard
I just don't like drop down my guard

Dear mom
Please don't yell and cry
I have told you, I try!
In school and life, I am much better
But the school just keep sending those letters

Dear mom
Please don't kill me with those eyes
Don't you know you mostly make me cry?
Your words, do you really mean them to me?
It is your words I will take to the eternity

Dear mom
I am sorry, I am a failure and I am bad
I hurt you, make you cry, that makes me sad
In your name I will bleed forever
Then we can wonder what we could have together

I'm sorry mom
I'll try
Just please don't kill me with those eyes



Poetry by Tina
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Written on 2005-11-30 at 14:23

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pettyodd
I read all your texts
and this was truely
the best, and really
good :)
2005-12-01


Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Absolutely amazing poem. I loved the image of "In your name, I will bleed forever."
Certainly strikes a chord with me!
Well done and loadsaluv esti
2005-11-30