haiku

sun knives cutting
leaves from autumn twigs
snails have yellow hats



Haiku by Loke
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Written on 2005-12-01 at 08:45

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R.K.Singh
I like the last line most; it enhances the autumnal effect so much.
2005-12-06



:-)
2005-12-06


els
adorable (:
2005-12-01


Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
What a dreamy haiku!
Well done and
luv esti
2005-12-01