just lost a friend...


"friends" a rant...

Isn't it grand
When you lose a friend.
They shake your hand,
Then call an end.

Isn't life great?
Aren't people nice?
All of their hate,
and all of their vice

Love is the best!
Love ends in strife.
Beauty will test
All of your life

Goodbye my "love",
Fall away clean,
no mind that i strove
to please you, queen.

Goodbye apathy!
Goodnight cold!
Later, stay healthy
(i hope you mold)

Don' people rule?
Aren' we lucky?
They think you're a fool,
I think they're -----
.
.
.
.
.
Wait,
No,
I don't mean that.
I wish you well.
Live long,
Live strong,
Remember me....
Remember me....



Poetry by Joe Fern
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Written on 2007-08-20 at 05:06

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sabereh lotfian
You know what to do with the words flying in your mind so very well & a very true truth is expressed here:

Love is the best!
Love ends in strife.
Beauty will test
All of your life...

it's so well-penned, thanks for sharing it :)

Take care,
Sabereh
2007-08-21


Inchworm
Wow... okay so, who was this written about?...

very very emotional! Well written.
2007-08-20


Rob Graber
I enjoyed this!
2007-08-20