suddenly i feel jumpy at almost everything, dont know what wrong! i fear what has been for years


hollow consternation

the sough of waters afar
the thudding of mammoths dead
and my head starts to spin
i thread on paths forgotten
and seek the glory of a win

the heavens are still, yet my soul torments
ghosts lie in their graves
why do i still suffer this
panic, fright, disorder

when shall i best this
hollow consternation



Poetry by Awenlimobor Sylvester
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Written on 2007-09-26 at 01:49

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
fears can be debilitating and frustrating when they keep persisting... that's what i got out of your poem... the imagery employed to get the feelings of wanting out of this path are strongly felt.... nice work :f xx
2007-09-26