without





so it flows
a meaning I never knew
and you in darkness

hurt fellt in a touch
silence creeping beside

naked and without hope
are days passing by



Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-10-23 at 15:01

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
It seems to me the power of your writing is that you almost
demand empathy...That's a special talent you have...

xxxx Stan
2007-10-24


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
naked and without hope
are days passing by

The sheer power in this phrase has me reaching for the water
this is a wonderful description of love well done rgds mike
2007-10-24


Rob Graber
This really evokes the empty feeling of a relationship sick or dying, if not dead.
2007-10-23