For the most beautiful Rose of Albany


Flowering in morning light by M.A.Meddings

You are so beautiful in this soft light 
You filled my night with lovely dreams 
And wonderful schemes of enchantment 
I just love how 
The light  now reflects softly from your face 
They call it  inner grace 
But I describe it as 
My darling glowing 
My angel blooming 
My rose of Albany 
Flowering in morning light



Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2008-01-27 at 07:56

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David L Wright
A lovely sentiment, a little flowery for my tastes, but a good write nonetheless. Happy trails neighbor.
2008-02-02


Rob Graber
NICE!

I like how "softlight" is one word in line 1; might be worth considering "morninglight" for the final line... (?) In any case, a smooth and romantic write.
2008-01-28


Kathy Lockhart
what a beauty you have written. When you write darling such beauty I know you have added not only to the quality of my life but to all the world for beauty goes on eternally once it is created.
I love this and I love you. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyblyvm
2008-01-27